CAW 32: Not Again....

Discussion in 'Calling All Writers - CAW 32' started by Clover Ernest, Dec 3, 2017.

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  1. Clover Ernest

    Clover Ernest Master Of Mayhem

    CAW 32: Not Again....

    My story is based on image #9



    Gojhirrah!!
     
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  2. Missrachael

    Missrachael Queen of Cheshire

  3. Missrachael

    Missrachael Queen of Cheshire

    Am I missing something..... Like words?
     
  4. Clover Ernest

    Clover Ernest Master Of Mayhem

    It says Pic #9... oh! It's Godzilla!
     
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  5. Missrachael

    Missrachael Queen of Cheshire

    Still none the wiser.
     
  6. AnX...

    AnX... Bloody nuisance

  7. Uncle B

    Uncle B Well-Known Member

    Well, I see a spelling error, and the use of two exclamation marks might be overkill, but maybe you feel very strongly about it. Also in the title, I believe an ellipses should be 3 dots, and no longer.

    I wasn't really impressed with the story, however you did add which picture it was based on. I will give minimal bonus points for that.

    I wish you luck in the competition, however I'm not sure that you need it.
     
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  8. AnX...

    AnX... Bloody nuisance

    Tis fair to say its not my least favourite thus far without upsetting its author. I can't see anyone purchasing the film rights. It did raise a smile and a quick google of the word to see if I was missing something.
     
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  9. 1 Toy Maker

    1 Toy Maker Well-Known Member

    It's short and to the point. I did find a few grammar issues.
     
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  10. Pars001

    Pars001 #1 Knight Writer

    huh?
     
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  11. Little Miss K

    Little Miss K Naughty but Nice

    I don't know that this counts as a story, but I admit... :oops::rolleyes::oops:

    I kinda laughed. :p
     
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  12. fantasysflirt

    fantasysflirt Active Member

    ... Ummm... Great starting point!

    Does Godzilla have a translator?
     
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  13. ejls

    ejls Moderator Staff Member

    No comment
     
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  14. ahorsewithnoname

    ahorsewithnoname Author & Admin. Live. Love. Write! Win a Pulitzer! Staff Member Founder