CAW 32: Harley Screwed

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  1. Pars001

    Pars001 #1 Knight Writer KAW Winner

    CAW 32: Harley Screwed

    I stretched my five foot, eight inch body as I walked out the back door of the building I was working in. Groaning as my back made a few popping sounds. Shaking my head I cleared the brown hair that had fallen out of place in my face. Walking to my car I sighed, consigning myself to the fact that I would be alone for another weekend.

    Maybe I thought, I ought to try out the bar scene again? No, the last time it had ended in total disaster. True I was a glutton for punishment at times. Being laughed at twice in bed, my bed for the same thing kept me far from that.

    I had just reached my Toyota Celica when I stopped hearing a sound. Looking around, I didn't see anything or anyone. Shrugging I opened the door sliding into the driver's seat. Suddenly I heard a low laugh that started to pick up in volume.

    A hand suddenly covered my mouth as I felt something cold and metal at the back of my neck. "You're not the best looking but..." I felt, then saw a slender hand, then arm reach down my body to my crotch. "Ummm! I think I like this one puddin!"

    A male's voice started to laugh, an almost insane sounding laugh. "Damn babe, you always like the ugliest ones. Ok," that's when I heard and felt the taser as my body started to convulse the current running through me. "Hurry up, that won't hold him long. It's time we had some fun!"

    I jerked awake not knowing where I was or how long I'd been there. Then to my horror I found that I couldn't move my arms and legs! Again I heard two voices that seemed to be discussing me! Then I realized that I didn't have a stitch of clothing on! Then further horror I was laid out spread eagle on a bed.

    "Ok puddin, just like last time. If he can get me off we let him go with a bad headache." I heard the female say.

    "Agreed, I still get to fuck his ass with your toy." The male voice was saying. It was at that moment that I heard a click then a very loud humming or buzzing.

    I heard footsteps then I felt a hand go around my dick. Opening my eyes I gasp as I was staring up at Harley Quinn! Oh shit! I was a dead mother fucker! "Puddin at least put some lube on it before you do that! You dry screwed the last one just as I was starting to get off! That wasn't fair!"

    "As much as you like getting off with this, I get off on killing them! The last one was so tasty when he was screaming while I was cutting his balls off, slowly! Ha, ha, ha! It was the most fun I've had in a long time. Hurry up get started all ready, I'm anxious to start carving!" The male voice said.

    Harley looked up at me seeing that I was awake. "Oh good you're awake! Now we can have lots of fun!" Licking her lips she took the huge mallet off her shoulder, dropping it on the floor. With a laugh she opened her mouth taking all of my seven and a half inches down her throat. Suffice it to say I was hard in no time despite the threat of death hanging over me.

    Getting up, Harley quickly shucked her clothes rubbing her bare sex. Positioning above my dick she swiftly drove herself all the way down my shaft. With a squeal she settled on my lap. "Ready?" I heard a male voice
    say. Then I saw movement as the Joker came into my line of sight! Oh dear god! He had a HUGE vibrating dildo in his hands! What was he going...?

    "Go for it puddin!" I heard Harley say then I felt something pressing in my sphincter. Laughing like the maniacal mad man he is, I felt the pressure increase then I felt the huge dildo start to invade my ass! Oh shit! I felt like my ass was being spilt open. Screaming out I tried to move up and away only to find that Harley's body was keeping me basically still. "More puddin! That helped a lot!"

    Laughing harder I felt the Joker shove even harder driving more and more into my rectum! Oh god I was going to pass out! The pain was beyond anything I'd ever felt! Laughing more the Joker was still shoving it into me! "Take it boy! I know you like it, scream for me! Let me hear those delicious cries of pain and suffering!" With a final thrust I felt as if the damn dildo was about to come out my mouth! Screaming louder I heard the Joker groan in pleasure.

    "Oh puddin that's it! I think we finally found the one! My god! He's filling me! More puddin do it again!" I heard Harley say as she started to pant.

    The Joker laughed low as I felt the dildo pulled out partially then thrust back in all the way! Again I screamed at the searing, burning, ass splitting pain that rocked my body. Again I heard the Joker groan out in pleasure. Then I heard him start to pant, grunting as he turned the dildo on. "Take it all boy! Your screams are making me... Yes! I'm finally cumming!"

    I felt Harley moving faster and faster panting out short breaths. Then suddenly I felt her tighten up feeling as if her vagina was going to rip my dick off!

    "Yes! Yes! Yes! Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Then she collapsed on me breathing hard. A few minutes later she sat up licking my face. I tried to move away from her but was still immobile with a huge vibrating dildo in my ass. Finally unable to take any more I passed out.

    I wasn't sure how long I was out when I awoke next. I was still naked but I was no longer spread eagled and tied down. ‘Damn,’ I thought, ‘I'm not dead?’ Looking around I saw I was in a room with a metal door and not a lot more.

    I looked at the door as it started to open, Harley Quinn, stark naked walked in! What in the hell was going on?

    "Ah! Good you're awake again. You did real damn good today. That's the reason you're still alive. You made my puddin cum along with me. Puddin hasn't in a long time; he's out taking a few things. This is for you," She said indicating a huge tray of food that she sat in front of me. "You need to eat up; you're going to need your strength."

    "I thought you were going to let me go." I said through almost cracked lips.

    "Well...." Harley said thinkiung. "We might one year but not right now! Oh! This is for your ass!" She handed me a large tube of something that was called astro glide. "It will help you take the toys that puddin uses on you." Leaning down she slapped me on my face. "Don't get too comfortable! You don't make me cum just once and I'll be the one carving on your dick and balls. Might even stuff them and hang them between my breasts!"

    Here she pushed her chest out was showing off her naked 34c's. Then she reached over and slapped me even harder. "What have I done now?" I asked.

    "Nothing, like a good fuck toy you need to be taught. Remember get me off or we both will have fun cutting the shit out of you!" Harley told me. "These you might get to touch them one day IF you are lucky!" Then she spun around.

    With that she left the room growling at me that I needed to eat. The Joker was out and would return soon. Since he and she had both cum they were good for almost a week. Barely enough time for my ass and dick to heal.

    Every day Harley came in slapping me telling me to eat, warning me that I was dead if I didm't make her cum. Shaking my head I was afraid that soon I really would be dead. It was strange that no one had found us yet. I thought I would be missed from work. Sadly I heard nothing, then again knowing Joker and Quinn we were underground.

    A week to the day, I awoke in the room as Joker came in to get me. "Alright boy, it's time to have fun again! Scream for me like a little girl! Your screams were so stimulating! I want to hear more!" With that he grabbed my dick twisting it hard to the side causing me to scream. "Um so good!" I heard him say then I saw that his pants were starting to tent. "Good job boy! Keep this up and I might let you have a drink from it!"

    Moving close he started to rub his crotch on my face. Grabbing one of my nipples twisting it cruelly hard left and right, making me whimper and him groan again.

    Taking me out of the room I was again tied to the bed spread eagled. Quickly both Harley and the Joker stripped naked.

    "Ohh puddin! Did he excite you that much?" Harley said panting a bit. I looked over and saw that the Joker was by far larger and harder than I was.

    I decided right then and there I would do nothing, let them kill me! I was through being their sex toy! Brave thoughts when my damn body was reacting to what I was seeing. "Hold him tight baby, I think I might be able to this time then we can try the new toy!"

    "Ok puddin!" Harley said as they both untied me then Harley lay down. Joker pushed me on top of her then re-tied my arms. Taking my dick he put it in Harley then I thought he left. That was until I felt his cock enter my ass sliding in easily. Trying to get away from the invader, I once again was thrusting into Harley. "Oh yes puddin do it!"

    I felt the Joker at my ear as I heard him say, "you're my good little bitch. Feel me deep in you, soon, you'll feel my cum right where it belongs! All the way as deep as I can go in your ass, you're mine! Get used to it we are going to fuck you every day, my little bitch ass cunt! Remember you better get her off, ass cunt or you're dead!"

    As Joker started to pound my ass harder, I began to scream as he swelled even larger in me. "Oh puddin that's it! Yes! Yes! Yes! Harder baby make him go harder!"

    Both of them were panting hard as I was pressing harder and faster into Harley. The pain, oh god the pain!

    Then Harley screamed out as she tightened around me squeezing me even harder. That's when I felt the Joker thrust in as far as he could emptying his balls deep in me. I screamed again as his semen was painfully hot in me then I passed out again.

    I seemed to drift in and out of consciousness finally opening my eyes. Startled I looked around the room I was in. What was going on? This was a hospital, how did I end up here? Looking near the window I thought I saw a dark figure then it vanished!

    A moment later a doctor came in looking at my chart then ordering the nurse to take samples.

    "Do you know where you are?" The doctor asked.

    "I think the hospital." I said after a moment.

    "Yes, you were found unconscious. It appeared that you had been severely molested. You had burns in your rectum though not serious enough to threaten your life. Can you remember what happened to you?" The man asked.

    I opened my mouth to speak then snapped it shut. I was drawing a blank about what had happened to me. "No I can't doctor, the last thing I remember was leaving work.

    "Yes, well that was over three weeks ago. We'll keep you here until we are sure you are clear." The man responded.

    I nodded as the man left the room. Laying there I again tried to remember what had happened to me. All I could see was a white faced man, a woman with a mallet plus a lot of sex. Damn I needed sex I was about to go nuts laying her. I needed to get laid soon. Sighing I knew I had to wait. I wondered if I could hook up at one of the clubs. The sooner the better.
     
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  2. Missrachael

    Missrachael Queen of Cheshire

    Great story, would have loved it to be longer. Well done.
     
  3. Justanotherslut

    Justanotherslut Active Member

    Very well written, good story and a nice quick read!
     
  4. Pars001

    Pars001 #1 Knight Writer KAW Winner

    oooooook lot of fear not only death but being screwed to death lol
     
  5. AnX...

    AnX... Bloody nuisance

    Liked it and I expected it to be longer, well done.
     
  6. Redbeard1031

    Redbeard1031 Well-Known Member

    If you were going to die this might not be a bad way to go. At least he still has his cock and balls. I enjoyed this tale. Thanks for your submission.
     
  7. Uncle B

    Uncle B Well-Known Member CAW Winner

    The whole way through this I kept hearing Harley's high pitched, squeaky voice. To me that means that you did a good job of staying with the character. We might not read this in a comic book from DC, but it felt true to the nature of the Joker and Harley.

    I wasn't really interested in the kinky sex, but the story was well written, so I enjoyed it. More like reading a twisted horror story than erotica. Definitely things to be scared of here.

    This was based on picture #13. I wish you would have added that point.
     
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  8. 1 Toy Maker

    1 Toy Maker Well-Known Member

    I don't know if it will become a classic but it was good.
     
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  9. bistander

    bistander Well-Known Member KAW Winner

    I know who wrote this one because of their style of writing. I shall not say, though. I noticed mistakes that might have been caught by a proofreader, but if you're like me, you didn't have time to find one of them.
    I want to have the story tell me which picture it is based on, not the author. Like show me, don't tell me. If it doesn't, then it loses points with me. This one made it obvious which picture it was based on.
    Thank you
     
  10. Little Miss K

    Little Miss K Naughty but Nice CAW Winner

    This is a very violent crime story that brings up some questions. :eek:

    This is very interesting to me. No one has called this a rape story. Because it is a man who is being assaulted, do people see it differently? :confused: To me it is most definitely a rape, and a very violent one at that.

    Now, that doesn't mean that I didn't like the story. It didn't really glorify rape, only showed how crazy Harley and The Joker were.

    Also nobody has mentioned the "dark figure" at the window. Was he saved by Batman? YAY! :)

    I can't say that I was excited about the sex, but it was what it was, and it was written well.

    Thank you for a crazy crime story with these psychos. :)
     
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  11. ejls

    ejls Well-Known Member Staff Member CAW Founder CAW Winner

    For me, I needed more story. It didn't necessarily need to be longer and much as I would have liked more detail. It was a sex story that left me with questions. I'm truly not a fan of rape stories, but it was well written.
     
  12. ahorsewithnoname

    ahorsewithnoname Author & Admin. Live. Love. Write! Win a Pulitzer! Staff Member Founder CAW Winner

    Okay, I know of Harley Quinn, but know nothing of her. The Joker I know from the Batman movies, notably Heath Ledger. I've never read a comic book from cover to cover, just like I never read Alice in Wonderland, only tortured having to watch the Tim Burton movie. But, I digress.

    I thought the story was okay. I thought it had possibilities, but, it seemed rushed, almost as if the person writing it was rushed to get it in under the wire, which wasn't the case. I found a lot of problems with it from a technical sense.

    I stretched my five foot, eight inch body as I walked out the back door of the building I was working in.
    Used "I" three times in the sentence. "Stretching my five-foot, eight-inch body, I walked out the back door of the building where I was working." One less use of "I" and the sentence doesn't end with a preposition.

    Groaning as my back made a few popping sounds.
    Sentence fragment

    I had just reached my Toyota Celica when I stopped hearing a sound.
    Needs a comma after "stopped". Initially I read this as he had been hearing a sound and the sound stopped. Here's an example of why punctuation is important.

    I love cooking my family and my pets.

    vs.

    I love cooking, my family, and my pets.

    Then to my horror I found that I couldn't move my arms and legs! Again I heard two voices that seemed to be discussing me! Then I realized that I didn't have a stitch of clothing on! Then further horror I was laid out spread eagle on a bed.
    Three of the four sentences in a row started with "Then" and three sentences in a row with exclamation points.

    "Well...." Harley said thinkiung.
    A simple spell check would have found this.

    I know who this author is, obviously, as CAW Host, and I expect better. This author is talented, and this was a sub-par submission.

    And if it seems like I'm being a dick, understand that I have given up blowing smoke up people's asses. I'll praise to high heaven when called for, and bring the pain when it too is necessary. IF you are an author and you don't wish for me to give my honest opinion, simply Inbox me and tell me not to critique your story, and, when I know it is yours, I will agree not to. Otherwise, submissions are fair game.

    I liked the sex in this story as it fit perfectly. I'm fine with rape stories as it is a part of life, especially in slash fan fiction like this. This story had great potential...it just seemed rushed, and too narrowly focused. 'nuff said.
     
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  13. Tom P.

    Tom P. Member

    To me, the most becoming part of this story, is the critique by Horse. The thread itself was below par for this body.